Wow, we have reached chapter 14! Sometimes, it feels like a dream to me, that I have readers who enjoy my little fiction. And then I wake up, and it amazingly still exists.
I think the story will end at Chapter 16-18, it depends on how long the chapter gets. This is my maiden attempt at a full original fiction and I have learnt quite a bit through the process, I hope you will enjoy this final arc!
Also, many thanks and sweet hugs to sutekii who so kindly wrote a recommendation and review for Little Moon. *I'm so touched!*
Also, many thanks and sweet hugs to sutekii who so kindly wrote a recommendation and review for Little Moon. *I'm so touched!*
Chapter 14: A Difficult Choice
Little Moon/Yue
(i)
I felt like my brain was breaking into a thousand
fragments, and yet it also felt like everything was finally falling into place.
Uncle patted my head, “Don’t worry, you will always be
my niece, Yue. But you have a choice to make… a choice I wish you didn’t have
to make. I was happy when you wanted to be a Moon Maiden, I thought this might
be fate and this was your road to divinity. However, somehow your destiny got
crossed with Hsiao’s again…”
“Yue, if you continue on your path to be a full-fledged Moon
Maiden, you will accumulate divine essence and your heartstone will stabilize
again. You will be immortal and slowly become a real goddess,” Uncle gave me a
warm smile before continuing, “But, if you choose to go against this path, if
you choose to be with Hsiao, it will be uncharted territory. You will be
neither mortal nor immortal… you will likely suffer karmic retribution and
vanish.”
Prince Sun/Xi Yang
(ii)
To say I was disgruntled watching over Hsiao
would be a modest underestimation. After teleporting Yue back to the Heavenly
Realms to the Moon God, I rode Hsiao’s horse with Hsiao to the Capital. I had
considered using a wandering cloud or teleporting straight to the Capital, but
I was skeptical if Hsiao’s physical body could take such a disturbance.
Although it had taken some time to bring Hsiao back to
the Royal Yan Palace, I wasn’t worried about Hsiao’s life. Hsiao’s pulse had
largely stabilized with half of Yue’s heartstone. It took all my restraint not
to want to tear it out of his chest. I scowled as I watch Hsiao sleep soundly
in his bedchambers. When I had first arrived at the palace gates with Hsiao’s
royal token, the soldiers had practically fallen to their feet in panic to see
their long absent Second Prince return with a serious injury. After countless
examinations by the Imperial Doctors, they pronounced that the Heavens had looked
kindly upon their Second Prince and he would wake up soon. They had marveled at
how the poison had miraculously resolved in Hsiao’s body even without an antidote.
I had refused to explain my identity to these silly
mortals, and they had placed me in a neighboring royal pavilion as they waited
for Hsiao to awake. Although uncertain of my origins, they did not dare to
treat Hsiao’s saviour lightly.
“If you are a man, you should wake up now,” I scoffed and
prodded Hsiao’s forehead as I sat on a stool next to his bed.
Since the first moment I met Hsiao, his body had
emanated a golden divine glow. It was obvious that he was fated to be the
Emperor, and was no ordinary mortal. I suppose my rival had to at least be of this
standard. But, I did not intend on wasting any more time on him for I wanted to
return to Heaven to check on Yue.
Hsiao
(iii)
I heard a strangely authoritative voice ordering me to
wake up through my ears. I scrunched my brows, who was that?
I opened my eyes and came face to face with quite possibly the most physically handsome man I had ever seen. Strong brows, an aristocratic nose, a
charismatic mouth. His eyes flickered with a menacing light, and there was a
light glow around him as if he was absorbing the essence of the environment
into his skin.
“Finally,” he intoned with faint annoyance, “I have
something to tell you before I leave.”
He scoffed at the confusion in my eyes, “Yes, I am your
saviour. No, Yue is not here. She is in Heavens now.”
I felt a pang of terror flow through my veins and he quickly
pressed a meridian point to immobilize me, “Don’t panic, you are going to slow
down the healing process. Yue is not dead. Far from it, she has only returned
to her rightful place in the Heavenly Realms.”
He paused, “I suppose I should start from the beginning.”
He stared at me, “If I tell you I am the Crown Prince of
Heaven, Prince Sun, would you believe me?”
Prince Sun smiled, a faint devious smile like a knife,
as he released my meridian point, “Come, follow me to the window. There are too
many guards outside.”
I slowly rose up from the bed, and followed
Prince Sun to the wooden carved windows at the side of my bedchambers. It was
mid-day and the sun was blazing.
“I am the Crown Prince of Heaven and the sun is my symbol.
Watch carefully, and do not mistake me for a low level demon or ghosts,” Prince
Sun said as he waved his hand at the sun.
The world shut down. Everything was black all at once. Pitch
black.
“What I take back, I return,”
Prince Sun laughed and everything was bright again. The sun had returned.
He saw from my eyes that I understood and he looked back
with some appreciation, “Good, you are a man that is not easily fazed.”
“Now, Yue, she’s the niece of the Moon God,” Prince
Sun said with some softness in his eyes, “She had came down to earth to fix
your fates with three women. Basically, she will suffer karmic retribution and
vanish if you do not become the Yan Emperor and marry your three fated women.”
My heart
froze, but I knew that this must be the truth. Our fates are tied together.
Your success is my success, your failure is my failure.
Prince Sun turned his head, “It sounds like the guards are
coming in to look for you. That is all I have to say. Follow your fate
and don’t pull Yue down with you.”
With that, Prince Sun disappeared.
(iv)
The Emperor, my father, had summoned me to the
Royal Main Hall. When I arrived, I saw father on his throne, with mother at his right, both seated on top of the raised golden platform. My eyes immediately crossed path with Big
Brother Qing who was standing in the middle of the hall in his royal armour. It
had been five years since I had seen any of my kin and distance
had not made the heart fonder.
I had asked to be sent away from the
palace when I was young, for I had grown to despise the politics between
my mother and my brother. Mother knowing my difficult temperament, had sent me
to study martial arts from a pugilist who had long retired from the pugilistic
world but had owe her a favor. It was much later that I realized that Shi Fu (师父 – teacher) had been the sworn brother of both mother and aunt. Many years ago, he was the most skilled pugilist in the jianghu (江湖 pugilist world), but
even he could not prevent the future discord between the twin sisters. He had
agreed to teach me his skills and the ways of the world for one promise – for
mother not to kill Big Brother Qing. I still remembered Mother’s bitter
laughter at that request.
In these five
years, I knew Mother had fostered political support for me from the Premier and
the senior royal officers, while Big Brother Qing had the backing of the army and the
generals.
The Emperor smiled as I
bowed down in greeting, “Father Emperor, humble greetings from your unfilial
son.”
He lifted up his hand to indicate I could dispense with ceremony, “Have you enjoyed your freedom, Hsiao Er (儿 - affectionate greeting to
son and children)?”
“Yes, though it had came
with a painful price,” I said and touched the part of my chest where the blade
had thrust.
The Emperor laughed, a
deep throaty laugh, as he gave an intense look to Big Brother Qing and me, “My
two sons, my only blood kin, my left and right hand. And yet, there is only one
throne.”
“I know Hsiao has not
turned twenty one, but destiny does not wait,” The Emperor said with a faraway
look in the direction of the sky, “My father once told me that the greatest Emperor will
be recognized on the day that the sun turns black. I never believed him… but
did not the sun just turn black at mid-day?” He shook his head, “Destiny does not
wait.”
The Emperor raised his
right hand as if beckoning for something, and the Head Royal Eunuch Ji Fu (积福 – accumulate prosperity) arrived with a box
made of pure gold, it had a dragon with five claws emblazoned on it.
“When both of you
were sixteen, I gave both of you a choice – to stay in the palace or go out to
see the world. I declared that when both of you turned twenty-one, I would ask
both of you the same question, and the answer will determine who would inherit
this throne,” The Emperor intoned seriously, “Qing Er decided to learn the
ropes in the army and Hsiao Er decided to leave and roam the lands. At that
time, I sealed my answer in this golden box.”
“Now, I shall ask both of
you, what must an Emperor have to rule?” The Emperor announced his question like
a royal decree that would forever burn down any possible bridge between Big
Brother Qing and I.
Big Brother Qing stepped
forward immediately, the sharp gaze in his eyes was a flash of blade as he answered victoriously, “力 (Strength). A strong kingdom needs a strong
emperor, one with undoubted power, one whose words will embody might.”
With that, Big Brother
Qing’s eyes turned to me, with a slight sneer, what will you answer? You,
who had been running away since birth.
Ever since I entered the
Royal Main Hall, my mother’s eyes never left me. For the first time, I returned
her intense gaze. I saw worry, I saw hope, I saw anticipation. But most of all,
I saw acceptance, I fought so long for you, my child, not for you
necessarily to gain the throne, but for you to have it if you wanted it.
I turned to the Emperor. He had always been
more an Emperor than a father. The weight of the throne bore him down more
heavily than any blood bond between us.
“Today the world went momentarily dark when the sun turned black. However, I did not fear because
I knew that the light did not only come from the sun. Because of the moon, I found my heart again. And, therefore, my answer is 心 (heart). Because a heart is not so easy to
touch… you need real feelings to stir a heart. A kingdom is not just a kingdom,
it is made up of countless men, women, children, people who have only one thing
in common, which is a heart born on our Yan soil. The kingdom I want to rule is
my people’s hearts,” I answered, more truthfully and more sincerely, that I ever had been in any of my conversations with the Emperor.
“You are
too naïve,” Big Brother Qing laughed.
I turned to
look at Big Brother Qing, “You can kill someone but not triumph over his
heart.”
The gaze between the two
of us smoldered until the Emperor gave a forceful pat on the armrest of his
throne, “Open the golden box.”
Head Royal Eunuch Ji Fu
opened the golden box, took out the golden silk scroll and unraveled it before
our eyes.
There was only one word,
large, bold and complete, “心”.
Big Brother Qing took a few
steps back as if his knees could not bear the weight of his shock, “This is not
true. This is a trick!”
The Emperor was
stone-faced and calm, “Qing Er, I will pardon you because you must be shocked.
But, this was no trick. I had written this myself when both of you were sixteen
and personally sealed it. No one had seen this scroll since.”
“Qing Er, I do not
disagree that an Emperor needs strength and power to rule, in fact I used to
have the exact same mindset… but twenty years ago, when the Wu Kingdom’s mighty
army was decimated at the Xue mountains by a small battalion of elite Xue
soldiers… I knew then, that might cannot be the only answer,” The Emperor said
in a calm, almost compassionate tone, as he waved Head Eunuch Ji Fu forward
again.
Head Eunuch Ji Fu
carried out another crystal box that glistened and seemed to be made wholly out
of ice. I let out a surprise breath of air when I saw what laid in the crystal box – the
golden Holy Xue ginseng.
“A few days ago, while
Hsiao was still unconscious, we received a royal envoy from the royal family in
the Xue mountain tribe. They had heard of Hsiao’s injury and sent this golden
Holy Xue ginseng to him,” The Emperor said in a voice with a light trickling of
awe, “They called him a close friend... if not for the Imperial Doctors pronouncing Hsiao out of danger, I would have fed Hsiao the golden Holy Xue ginseng.”
Before I left the
Xue Mountain Tribe, I had disclosed to Princess Bai Ying my real identity… but
even this was unexpected.
The Emperor looked at Big
Brother Qing, “I would not say that this proves that Hsiao is right… but that
was the way I had chosen five years ago, and that is the way I am interested to
see where it leads for the Yan Kingdom. You are a great army commander, Qing
Er, and I hope to see you assist Hsiao Er in bringing the Yan Kingdom to greater
heights.”
“Henceforth, I hereby announce
that Hsiao Er will be the Crown Prince of the Yan Kingdom…”
(v)
When
father had made his announcement, the sun had really fallen and night had
descended. I requested to return to my bedchambers to rest because of my
injuries. In truth, everything was too overwhelming – the truth of Yue’s
identity, the eclipse of the sun, my sudden crowning.
Just when I thought I would
no longer be able to breathe, I saw that there was already someone outside the
courtyard of my bedchambers. Only I could see her and the soldiers guarding my
bedchambers appeared unaware of this beautiful figure in white robes.
As if she heard my footsteps, she turned to me and smiled, “Hsiao.”
New update!!! Thanks a lot.. keep up the fabulous work... u have made up my day.. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you!!! Your comment made my day too :)
DeleteI.♡ Hsiao...but, i would luv more for Yue to stay in Heaven wt prince Sun who luvs her since 8yrs old *swoon*
ReplyDeleteThanks decembi *mwah*
Samie? Haha what a passionate Xi Yang fan!
DeleteHaha I'm on the second ship too :p (but I love Hsiao too)
DeleteI think Hsiao's mother is really a tragic figure - everyone distrusts her and thinks she killed her sister so that her son can inherit the throne. I'm not sure but I feel that the sister set her up so that Qing could be the Crown Prince. Really hope that two brothers can reconcile.
- lemonsalt
Hello lemonsalt,
DeleteI was really happy that you felt sympathy for Hsiao's mother. <3 I'm not good at these palace politics and only wrote as real as I felt.
ME TOO! I started out as a solid, solid Hsiao fan and a total main OTP shipper. and I very rarely get second lead syndrome...BUT....Xi Yang is totally the man of my heart. I love the grumpy, harsh guys who have the inexplicable soft spot for the girl...T.T now I kinda wish you hadn't already told us the end of who ends up with whom...at least I'd be able to hold onto some hope.
DeleteHello Unknown, awww I love your description of Xi Yang. Actually the grumpy harsh type is my favourite type too!!! It's just that Xi Yang wasn't the planned lead for this story. >< Let me give you a second lead hug!
Deleteme too....i prefer yue to stay in heaven with xi yang...let hsiao be with his childhood sweetheart
DeleteHahaha! I don't know if i should yay for xi yang or awww for yue
DeleteYou're welcome decembi ^^"
ReplyDeleteoh I can just imagine Hsiao world crumbling when Prince Sun told him Yue Er has gone to heaven LOL
Hmm... I do wonder if Hsiao is one of those immortals that came down to earth to go those trials
*hugs* yes, xi yang was pretty evil, wasnt he?
DeleteOh, that was fantastic. I love the chapter's ending.
ReplyDeleteOooh thank you, that makes me really happy ♡
DeleteYehey new chapter! Thx decembi!!!
ReplyDeleteWhaat a dilemma. I like Yue & Hsiao but I don't want any of them to die. huhuhu
Heehee! Chapter 15 is vvv exciting ♡
Delete“My father once told me that the greatest Emperor will be recognized on the day that the sun turns black. I never believed him… but did not the sun just turn black at mid-day?”
ReplyDeleteAh so prince sun unintentionally(or not) helps hsiao in his path of becoming an emperor huh? �� quite a good guy we got here teehee
Hahaha! If you really want to know, it's unintentional of Prince Sun, but part of the workings of Fate. Prince Sun usually causes an eclipse when he is extremely emotionally upset.
Delete*sigh* turn between two Crown Princes...
ReplyDeletecan I have the two? haha
-aimey
Hahaha! I don't really know how Xi Yang is reeling the readers in <3
DeleteI cant wait for the next update!!! Even though I know it would be a happy ending, I cant help but worry...Thank you for the story!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the support! It's huge encouragement for me. :) I'm editing chapter 15 already. TO THE FINISHING LINE!
DeleteHi Decembi,
ReplyDeleteI am wondering about the pic above in red, who it is.
actually when I first saw it i dont think of anyone, but after read the story, i think it fits Qing. but I still not sure if it is perfectly fit. but if it is Hsiao it self then it just doesnt fit my imagination.. hahahaha... but who am I... you are the author then you choose your character.
anyway.. I am really enjoy your story and waiting for the new updates everyday and I encourage you to start a new project once this one done.
cheers
She.ly,
DeleteYou are absolutely correct! It is Qing :). I wanted to pick an aristocratic looking figure that will look perfect on the battlefield. It looks quite similar to Hsiao in Chapter 4, but this one looks more menacing. I did not state it explicitly in this chapter, but you can infer that Hsiao and Qing look quite identical since their mothers are twins, but they have different auras.
Aww, thank you for checking my site everyday! I try my best to have interesting content. It's been a great joy for me to read about people enjoying my story. I'm very grateful <3
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DeleteAha.. i guess so, Qing and Hsiao should be a look quite identical (one glance then you know they are brothers) it was on my mind also when you have introduce Qing in this chapter.
Deleteand It's been a great joy for me to read a great story by a great author. *wink-wink
*star wishing that you will post the next chapter tomorrow*
:D
Sorry,
Deletei have a mistyped error on my previous comment so i deleted it. :D
Awww thank you, She.ly. I'm grinning super wide now! I'm editing chpt 15 and v excited to share it. Cross fingers i finish it in time ♡
Deleteonly left 2-4 chapters decembi so sad :( .... i like this chapter looking forward for the next :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hanny, for the support <3. I will write epilogues :) heehee
Deletenice!! i just hope for happy end
ReplyDeleteThank you giginkanovels!! :) I know this takes away some of the tension, but like I said at the start this has a happy ending lol. <3
Deletereally? I must forget... but now I know for sure:) thanks
DeleteThanks for reading <3 I can't wait to share the end!
Deletewell, we cant wait too...and I dare to say we are more impatient than you ;)
DeletePS. you write really nicely, its smooth and easy to understand
Awww thank you so much for your feedback! I try my best :)
DeleteI've been a silent reader and have been following your site for the last couple of months. I've really enjoyed reading your work and love that you're posting your own work. I have to admit that I check your site everyday hoping for more chapters. :) Thanks for all your hardwork!
ReplyDeleteThank you for being such a supportive silent reader. I'm really happy that you have left a comment. Honestly, every single comment gives me such great encouragement to spur on! Thank you for anticipating the chapters. I'm editing chapter 15 now.
Deletedecembi, i haven't been commenting for some chapters but i am reading them. I wonder, what happened if both the answers do not match the answer in the box? I know it is your story but Im just wondering, LOL.... I don't think Prince Qing will leave it like that...Im afraid of Hsiao safety >_<
ReplyDeleteand of course, endure for the next chapter...
Hello fangorn, thanks for the support ♡ i really enjoy the questions! Actually, the emperor's question is deceptively simple and will tend to lead to the two extreme answers shown. If the answers were different, the emperor could choose who was closest or set another task since no one can control the emperor haha.
DeleteChapter 15 will be up soon. Still editing ;)
Another solid chapter! Thanks Decembi!!! We're almost near the end and it's difficult to let go when you are having a good read but all things must come to an end to make way to a new beginning. The emperor issue has been quickly resolved and the much awaited return of Yue Er to meet Hsaio once again is finally here. How would Hsaio compete against Xi yang? Knowing that Yue Er is somewhat immortal, how is he taking it? What revelation and conclusion will they arrive at to reach their destiny?
ReplyDeleteHonestly loving the final arc. Although it is with sadness that I have to see its end soon, am glad that you did this mini-novel. It's breezy tone and refreshing take of an ancient novel would surely leave a sigh of satisfaction in its reader's memory.
Peachie
Hello Peachie, awww, yeah as I reach the end, I feel a sense of triumph and bittersweet relief. Your questions are all very interesting and hard to answer haha! Hopefully, chapter 15 goes some way towards that. I really like chapter 15 and about 90% done editing :) hehehe.
DeleteThank you for enjoying the breezy tone! I'm very happy you said it was refreshing. I try to spin the cliches into my own fun style. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts <3
Awww some one should totally write a fanfic of this...but for the Xi Yang fans..lol
ReplyDeleteHahahaha! Xi Yang fanfic. Wow, that would be awesome haha.
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