Sunday, 8 June 2014

Fiction: Little Moon's Matchmaking Mission! (Chapter 4)

   I have been so used to writing my commentary after my translated pieces that sometimes I find myself commenting after the chapter, but I usually delete the commentary later because I don't want to affect your reading experience. Haha. I find everyone's questions regarding the characters very intriguing, these were questions I thought about when I conceived the character and story framework but I didn't realise that readers will look so deeply into everything! I really am very thankful for the support. *does head bow again*

  I'm recovering quite well, and should be returning to translating by next week. Much love from me and Yue!

Chapter 4: Straight To The Heart

Little Moon/Yue Er


  I couldn’t stop my cheeks from reddening under Hsiao’s gaze. But, I brought out all my shamelessness, picked at my collar (while magicking a tiny Adam’s apple), “I’m still a guy, but I had to dress up as a girl to become a maidservant to get inside information… anyway, that’s not important, we need to get Gentleman Yun Feng to come with us.”

  With that, I turned away from Hsiao who looked like he was about to burst into laughter and walked towards Gentleman Yun Feng, “Greetings Gentleman Yun Feng, I have been sent by my mistress, Mei Yun, to ask you to come with us.”

  Gentleman Yun Feng looked surprised then a little suspicious, “Has she sent a message?”

  I looked around and saw that some of General Yang’s guards were looking at us. Even though they were unlikely to act in a crowd, there wasn’t much time to waste, “My love will remain even after the last blue hyacinths fall…” I repeated this line that Mei Yun kept murmuring to herself in the day as she thought about the competition, I suspected that it meant something between the two of them.

  Gentleman Yun Feng’s face reddened and he nodded, “I will follow you.”

  So, quickly, the three of us left, with Hsiao still giving me a mirthful look.


   Hsiao brought us back to the inn he had been staying at. That spendthrift actually rented an entire small villa from one of the Cloud Inns (owned by Master Qian Yun) and even Gentleman Yun Feng looked slightly surprised at the grand lodgings.

  I cleared my throat and told Gentleman Yun Feng, “My mistress was worried about your preparation for the second round of archery, so she asked me to…”

  Before I could finish, Gentleman Yun Feng raised up his palms, I could see that there were many cuts and calluses on them, “She has no need to worry. I have been practicing my archery… I’m still not good at it, but hopefully the heavens will look kindly on us and what I have will be good enough.”

  I nodded, “There are enough spare rooms here. Please practise and stay here for the night, so my mistress’ heart can be at ease.”

  Gentleman Yun Feng gave a respectful gesture of thanks and made his leave to practise his archery.

  I turned to Hsiao, who looked at me with a raised eyebrow and a smile, “So are you helping two different men now win Lady Mei Yun’s hand in marriage?”

  Shameless as I usually was, I blushed again, “Don’t you know? To know your competitor is to win the war. Gentleman Yun Feng is Mei Yun’s favourite to win her hand, it’s good to observe him at close quarters.”

  Hsiao chuckled and did not ask more. I continued, “Speaking of which, how is your archery?”

  Hsiao leaned his chin aside and gave me an examining look, “You don’t seem to know anything about me, do you? For a fortune teller who claims to share the same fate?”

  I patted him on his shoulder, “One must always look to the future, my friend, not the past!”

   I paused, “I can get you a bow and arrow to practise if you need them?”

  Hsiao shook his head, “Maybe you should go get some male clothing instead!”

  I huffed and left him laughing in the yard.



  It was late at night, both Gentleman Yun Feng and Yue had returned to their rooms to sleep. During the dinner conversation, it was clear whenever Gentleman Yun Feng mentioned about his “love” with Mei Yun, Yue would heavily pat Gentleman Yun Feng’s back to stop him and hastily gulped a cup of wine. It’s no surprise that I had to carry the tipsy Yue back and put Yue into one of the rooms under Gentleman Yun Feng’s worried gaze.

  Thinking of the tipsy Yue, I still remembered the moment when I first saw Yue in female attire. At this, I felt my heart experience a strange itching feeling. “Her” small face, fair complexion, bright eyes, blushing cheeks, “she” was like the young moon reflecting the beauty of all the budding blossoms on earth. There was something natural about Yue as a girl --- that equaled the strangeness of Yue as a male.

  I decided not to dwell on it any longer. To understand Yue was not to understand Yue.

  I smiled to myself as I heard the soft footsteps of the intruders on the roof. This Yue, clearly he had invited Gentleman Yun Feng to join us thinking he could protect Gentleman Yun Feng from General Yang’s men – but this silly child went to get himself drunk.

  I flew up the roof, “Greetings men, I’m afraid I have bad news for you.”


 Little Moon/ Yue Er

  The next morning, I woke up with a start. What happened to Gentleman Yun Feng? Darn it, I shouldn’t have drunk so much. My head was still woozy.

  I got up as quickly as I could and opened the doors. I bumped straight into Hsiao and Gentleman Yun Feng in the yard.

  I gave out a sigh of relief. Hsiao turned to me with a smile, “Had a good night’s sleep?”

  I nodded, “I’m sorry for the wait. Let’s head to Cloud Manor to prepare for the second round.”

   As we left, I looked carefully around the small villa. No signs of intrusion during the night before. Maybe the weak shrouding spell I had placed on the villa worked! I didn’t have much confidence in my spell skills, but it looks like everything turned out fine. Looks like lady luck was on our side!

  When we reached Cloud Manor, I bade farewell to Hsiao and Gentleman Yun Feng so I could find Mei Yun and the twins.

   Mei Yun and the twins were already at the field outside where the archery tournament had been prepared. An archery target was set up about one-tenth of a Li ()* away from the starting line.

  Mei Yun was already seated at a specially prepared sheltered corner and she was worriedly looking at the target. I sheepishly paid my greetings to Mei Yun and the twins, “Lady, I apologise for leaving earlier yesterday, I was feeling unwell.”

  Mei Yun waved her hand as if to say it was of no importance, she turned to us, “Do you think we can move the target nearer to the starting line?”

  Xiao Hong Mei shook her head, “Your father’s guards are around, my lady. We can only pray for heaven’s blessings.”

  Hearing this, I thought to myself well… arguably I could try and use some of my powers and let the wind guide Gentleman Yun Feng’s arrow just like what I planned to do for Hsiao’s arrow… but if I did…

  Before I could complete my thought, I heard a trumpet sound. Master Qian Yun rose up to a stage that was prepared and greeted his ten distinguished male competitors, “We have set up a target one-tenth of a Li ()* away. The three arrows closest to the bull’s eye will move on to the final round to win my daughter’s heart.”

  Hearing this, Gentleman Yun Feng’s face paled while General Yang looked extremely smug and confident. Hsiao, as usual, appeared indifferent.

  Three gentlemen, whom I had not bothered to notice earlier, went up to take their turn at the target. One had completely missed the target. The other two were relatively competent, but their arrows hit the furthest rings of the target. They walked off disappointedly.

  Gentleman Yun Feng was fourth. Nervously, he walked up to the line with his own bow in hand. He took the arrow from one of the guards gingerly and placed it in his bow. He closed his eyes, gave a kiss to the bow, then pulled it taut – he released the arrow…

  It flew! And landed just right next to the bull’s eye.

  Even Mei Yun could not help herself, and she gave a clap of joy.

  General Yang saw this and his eyes turned cold. With heavy powerful steps, he walked towards the line, not even greeting Gentleman Yun Feng as he left, he quickly took an arrow and let it loose like a cannon shot from his bow.

  It landed on the bull’s eye!

  The four men who came after General Yang were perhaps affected by General Yang’s dominant aura. They did not fare too well, and Mei Yun was pleased to see that General Yang and Gentleman Yun Feng’s arrows were nearest to the bull’s eye.

  Now, it was Hsiao’s turn. I guess his usual indifference had its merits as he appeared completely unintimidated by General Yang’s show of brute force.

  I was preparing to concentrate all my powers to adjust his arrow if need be with the wind, when Hsiao let loose the arrow smoothly as if it was but a fleck of dust on his shoulder.

  Before I could even react, his arrow sliced into General Yang’s arrow.


  I turned to look at Hsiao, and that was when I realized he had not even been looking at the arrow. He was looking at me. He smiled, perhaps one of his first real smiles, for it reached his eyes, and seemed to say, So, are you finally looking at me?

Thud went my heart.

*At first, I used the olympic archery distance of 70m and Sherry astutely pointed out that such a measure of distance probably did not exist in ancient china. Thus, I used li (里) instead which is commonly accepted to be 500m in length. 

Little Moon's Matchmaking Mission!

Chapters: Prologue + 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17
COMPLETED Author's Note 
Epilogues: An Chi Hsiao&Yue Xi Yang The Moon God


  1. iˊm a long time lurker first time commenter and now iˊve decided to come out in the open to give you my support:-). I thoroughly enjoy your novel.

    1. Hello! Aww thanks for giving me the support and I'm so happy you are enjoying the novel! :)

  2. Oh Dear... Decembi! What have you done to me? My heart is beating very hard especially when Hsiao's arrow slicing over Gen Yang's and how he's looking for Yue Er's reaction right away. Gah.. Is it wrong for me to swoon over him? LOL :D I'm so falling in love with him.

    Btw, I like this statement: 'I decided not to dwell on it any longer. To understand Yue was not to understand Yue.' Naturally, you just have to let the nature and fate take their own course.

    Yeay! The OTP are falling in love. Couldn't wait for the next chapter! (^o^)v


    1. Hello hh,

      I'm actually very happy that you like Hsiao and found it swoon-worthy <3. Thank you.

      That's my answer to Hsiao's wondering of Yue's gender. Haha. To understand Yue was not to understand Yue.

    2. It was 100% swoon-worthy. I felt my heart skip a beat. Ah, my sister caught me and asked why I was so red.... she couldnt understand....

  3. hahaha...I guess Hsiao dont care if Yue is a girl or a boy, he likes Yue enough already to not care about Mei Yun actually. I wonder if he intends to "lose" the match to Gentleman Yun Feng in the 3rd round or not ...(I dont think General Yang can compete with Hsiao already) I don't think he needs the money that Mei Yun's family provide that badly. With his intelligence, he can figure a way...furthermore, he can build the relationship with Mei Yun, in another way by doing some matchmaking... :)

    1. Hahaha fangorn, I like your way of thought. I've scheduled the next chapter to be updated tomorrow morning <3

  4. “One must always look to the future, my friend, not the past!” my favourite quote from this chapter.

    And again our Yue Er is so naive to think her powers can actually prevent the intruders from entering the inn.

    I love the archery scene where Hsiao looks at Yue Er while shooting the arrow. I couldn't but squeal at that moment because all these wild imaginations are running through my head of a handsome man smirking at a beauty.

    1. Hello sutekii,

      Ooh I glad you like that one! Haha. Yue Er is such a bad fortune teller haha.

      I'm so happy you loved the archery scene! :) My husband thought it was quite corny but I said it's the kind of thing that makes my fluffy heart doki doki! Hahahaha.

    2. Unfortunately men and women's views of romances are entirely different.

      The things I find funny or romantic my husband thinks otherwise.

    3. Hahaha that's so true!!!

    4. Haha your husband and you are so cute Decembi! Maybe he could learn a few things from Hsiao? :)

    5. Hahahahahaha. That would be funny. But, I'm happy that he always has patience for my fluff. Haha.

  5. *squeals up & down*

    Thanks decembi!!!

    - samie

  6. hi Decembi...just got a chance to read your's good n the story flowing nicely :-) i see you take Yan Di as your inspiration for the fiction.

    From these 4 ch, i get a feeling that Hsiao n Yue will develop a romantic feeling for each other..don't know if my gut feeling is right...will have to wait for the story to be unfold

    1. Hahahaha! Oh i just realised I didn't put the chinese word for Yan here, I'm actually using 燕 (sparrow) instead of 炎 (yan di). I love birds lol hence I added them in subtly.

      Thank you for your kind comments ♡

  7. GalaxyAngel0078 June 2014 at 15:15

    Ahhhhhh!!!!!!! Hsiao!!!! ♡.♡ "So, are you finally looking at me?" That phrase! XD It was extremely wonderful and crazy and amazinh and cheezy(?) :)))) As usual, I again enjoyed your new post! I am so loving Hsiao and the adorable Yue.

    Thank you for the update! ♡♡♡You really do know when to end a chapter making me want more and more. I just wonder if Yue will fall for Hsiao sooner or later??? Please don't bother answering my question! XD hahahaha!!! Have a nice day and don't get sick again. Take care of yourself! :)

    I am now officially Hsiao's fan girl. ♡♡♡

    1. Hello GalaxyAngel007,

      Heehee! My husband finds the archery scene cheesy, but like I told sutekii, heehee such scenes makes my heart beat! Haha. I thought it would be fun to write a little of such scenes here and there, but not too much haha.

      :) Thanks for your support! heehee. I'm so happy that Hsiao gets fan girls! Haha, I wonder how he will react. Haha.

  8. love it thanks miss decembi...

  9. Hi Decembi,

    I wrote a long comment last night on Chapter 3 but my Ipad safari won't allow to post it :/

    Anyhow I will just and write it here together with Chapter 4 comments :)

    I noticed in Chapter 2 that her Adam's apple is a running gag! Is Yue too pretty to be a boy?? (I think I got my answer here when we learn of Hsiao's POV). Chapter 3 really ended on a good cliffhanger - couldn't wait to find out more about interaction between Hsiao and Yue. Probably Hsiao already knows that Yue is no ordinary mortal and also not of the male gender.

    "I turned to look at Hsiao, and that was when I realized he had not even been looking at the arrow. He was looking at me. He smiled, perhaps one of his first real smiles, for it reached his eyes, and seemed to say, So, are you finally looking at me?

    Thud went my heart."

    Fluff fluff fluff explosions!! Is Yue starting to see Hsiao as more than a mission now??

    Hmm is the second male lead, Prince Sun? So far there has been any mention of any other guy by Yue except him. Is he goinng to be a second male lead that leaves a memorable impression tinged with bittersweetness on the readers? Can't wait for more of the second lead to be revealed!

    The storyline of the secondary characters (Mei Yun and Yun Feng) are quite interesting. They could be the main characters in a totally different story. What strange character quirk does Gugu possess that make people forget her beauty? So far she seems like a conventionally nice person as a human. Unless her character is quite different as a human and as Gugu?

    At this point of the story, I'm wondering what is Hsiao's background? He seems like a person with charisma and of stature so how come nobody in the marriage competition recognizes him (if he is royalty)?

    Just some thoughts running through my mind as I read the few chapters. It is ok if you can't reveal too much spoilers now. Shall patient wait for the story to progress! Good luck with writing the remaining chapters and hope you feel better!

    1. Hello Lemonsalt,

      Sad! I hate ipad safari or blogger for losing your comment. :(

      Thank you for taking the time to write again. I really appreciate it <3.

      Hahaha, yes I've planned some running gags and her adam's apple was part of it. For me, whenever I read girl dressing up as a guy stories - I'm always thinking how realistic is this if the female character is supposed to be pretty?

      Yay, so happy you had fluff explosions. Haha. When I was planning the story, I knew I wanted to write such a scene haha. It's quite cliched, but it's something I think if you could watch it unfold before your eyes you would practically will to happen right? Writing this romantic comedy is a mix of inverting cliches and having some of them come true in fluffy ways. Haha. That's my aim.

      Yes, the second lead is Prince Sun. He has a really wonderful backstory with Yue, which will definitely surface in the story. :)

      I'm really happy that readers find the secondary characters interesting, although we don't get to see the story from their POV, I still thought about their own inner world and added little hints here and there to hopefully reveal their emotional states. I must state that Gugu is not Mei Yun and Mei Yun is not Gugu. Haha.

      Hsiao's background is a huge spoiler so I shall save that for now. It will all be revealed in good time, though I have left hints here and there. :)

  10. First of all.WELL DONE Decembi.
    You actually did what a few of us had been thinking of doing. Your writing is really good and right now it's flowing too. The plot is holding everything together and it may not be complex but all the light heartedness cheered me up.
    I'm loving Hsiao and the last scene had me grinning ear to ear. I could utterly imagine a guy giving a half smile to a girl across the field while showing off his skills.

    Keep going, you are doing great girl.

    1. Hello Escapism Fanatic,

      Thank you very much for your lovely comments! Aww, you are so kind. My writing is still very raw, but I'm so happy that people are enjoying the story! :)

      Teehee, so happy you like the last scene. It's one of my favourites! My heart is made of fluff.

      Thank you thank you :)

  11. decembi, thank you for this and sorry for my late comment...
    Mmmmm, it's about hsiao and yue but why do my heart skip a beat after reading the last paragraph?! >_______<
    oh , you really know how to make me fall in love to all the leads and deadly curious waiting for the next part!
    I read that the second male lead is prince sun. yay sound interesting! i can't wait! hihii

    1. Redhazel,

      No comment is ever too late! Thanks for always leaving your kind feedback. Teehee, so happy your heart skipped a beat! Teehee. I hope people will like Prince Sun too, though he can be arrogant. Hahaha.

  12. decembi you good in picking story to translate:) thankssss

    1. Haha, Hanny, I'm not translating this, I'm actually writing it haha.

    2. hah really decembi you write yourself? i was thinking to ask the link haha.... decembi its coolllll . You must make a novel . I go to Singapore and buy it hihi... and signature please :D

    3. *blushing* Haha, no lah I'm not that good. Just wanted to write a fluffy romantic comedy to destress and laugh at. :) I have only wrote till chapter 9. Haha.

    4. but its really good , the matchmaking also good idea for this novel , decembi what chapter there is kiss kiss lol..........anyway im looking forward for the next chapter:) .

    5. Hahahahahaha! I can't answer that. But thank you! I'm very thankful for your support :)

  13. This is great! Showing some love & thanks for your translation ❤️. I love the curious confident Hsiao!